Evening of rain

What is your favorite type of weather?

The cool breeze that breaking
The silence of deep night
The song of this silence
Makes me feel lonely.

The moon light was covered
Completely by dusky clouds
Like a procession of memories
is coming towards me.

Tiny drop of rainy season
Just trying to say something
While draining my skin
Just relax and enjoy a min.

The rustling branches
of the trees are making
me live this pleasant moment
making sure of my presence.

My tears have found
New friends today
Many layers of my heart
Have been cleaned now.

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  1. Lycaenidae's avatar lycaenidae says:

    How profound are those Last four lines🌱!!!.

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    1. Thank you so much for appreciation 🙏🥰

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  2. Lokesh's avatar Loku says:

    So the rain cleans places, buildings, water bodies (rivers, lakes), and a person’s tears.

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    1. Thank you so much for appreciation 🙏🥰😄

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  3. Lalita's avatar Lalita says:

    Impactful and sublime poetry 👍👍👍

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    1. Thank you so much for appreciation Mam 🙏🥰

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    2. Lokesh's avatar Loku says:

      Mam, can you explain the word sublime with some details?
      I know its meaning; but not in much detail.

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  4. Lalita's avatar Lalita says:

    Your poetry is impressive and drafted with strong emotions that makes it grand …The influence of rain on mind and body is sketched with great imagery That makes it sublime
    Last four lines leave an impact on the reader
    Keep going with your powerful pen Best wishes🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉

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    1. Thank you once again Mam 🤓

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  5. I loved this masterpiece!
    Check out some of my poems and share your feedback

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    1. Thank you so much for appreciation 🙏🥰

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  6. Sowmya-Uma's avatar Sowmya-Uma says:

    deeply Rooted 🌱

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    1. Thank you so much for appreciation 🙏🥰

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      1. Sowmya-Uma's avatar Sowmya-Uma says:

        Ever mind 😊

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