Unique turn

Which aspects do you think makes a person unique?

whom I considered qualities unique
that turned out to be person common
whom have nice talking technique
substance in their words are normal

With whom I wanted to travel a long way
upset me their reckless attitude formal
left in halfway turn and went away
This incident was not at all moral

I knew the times were undeservedly
Keep calm and tolerated it silently
Neither beat the drum of sorrow
nor shed tears or thought narrow

Just watching their journey
And didn’t even utter a word single
After sometime I found decay
They lying injured at some flexion

12 Comments

  1. Dinesh Kumar's avatar Dinesh Kumar says:

    Shashwat, uniqueness whispers in forgiveness, not fanfare.

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    1. Thank you so much Sir for your blessings 🙏🥰😊

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    1. Thank you so much for comment 🙏🥰

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  2. Joey Jones's avatar Joey Jones says:

    😯

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    1. Thank you so much mam for comment 🙏🥰😊

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  3. vermavkv's avatar vermavkv says:

    This is a deeply reflective and emotionally layered piece. You’ve captured the quiet disappointment of misplaced trust with remarkable honesty—the shift from admiration to realization feels very real and relatable. I especially appreciate the restraint in your voice; the calm endurance and silent observation speak louder than any outburst could.

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    1. Thank you so much Sir for your blessings 🙏🥰😊

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  4. Olia Lyra's avatar Olia Lyra says:

    That’s actually very true…
    sometimes what we thought was rare, isn’t.
    But not everyone feels it the same way.
    Not everyone carries it the same way.
    Some people say beautiful things…
    others bleed them

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    1. Thank you so much mam for appreciation 🙏🥰😊

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  5. Olia Lyra's avatar Olia Lyra says:

    You’re welcome 😊
    I can feel there’s something real behind your words…
    and that matters more than anything.
    Keep writing

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    1. 😃😄🙏🥰

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