Love

What are the most important things needed to live a good life?

You are my electron
I am your nucleus

You are my planet
I am your Sun

You are my black hole
I am your gravity

You are my apple tree
I am Newton’s attraction

You are my valence
I am you covalent bond

You are my chemistry
I am your chamical bond

You are my potential difference
I am your free electron

You are my close circuit
I am your current

You are my arithmetic
I am your calculator

You are my programming
I am you compiler

You are my train
I am you rail

You are my book
I am your reader.

Your are my life
I am your breath.

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31 Comments

  1. Ayanda's avatar Ayanda says:

    Like atoms, we bond, With love as our glue, Sharing electrons, Creating something new.❤️👩‍🔬 I love it!

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    1. Thank you so much 🙏🤓🤩😁

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      1. Ayanda's avatar Ayanda says:

        My pleasure.Keep up the good work 😁😁🥂

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    2. Gosh that was beautiful! ♥

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      1. Thank you so much for appreciation 🙏🥰

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  2. What a beautiful read of this wonderfully crafted expression of love and unity …

    The metaphors are so vivid and have the depths of connection and interdependence.

    Loved reading it ✨

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    1. Thank you so much for appreciation 🙏🤩🥰

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  3. Your metaphors beautifully illustrate the interdependence and connection between entities in relationships and life. Each pair shows how one entity fulfils and relies on the other, highlighting the importance of mutual support, connection, and purpose.👌

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    1. Thank you so much for appreciation 🙏🙏🥰

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  4. daisy's avatar daisy says:

    Wow!!👏

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    1. Thank you so much 🙏🙏🤩

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  5. ❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️

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    1. Thank you so much for appreciation 🙏🥰

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    1. Thank you so much mam for appreciation 🙏🥰

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  6. Celina's avatar Celina says:

    Amazing Metaphors expressing love. Loved this ❤️

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    1. Thank you so much for appreciation Mam 🙏🙏🤩🥰

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  7. Celina's avatar Celina says:

    You’re most welcome

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  8. VanyA V@idehi Vani 8324's avatar VanyA 8324 says:

    Beautifully written. Its love 💕

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    1. Thank you so much Mam for appreciation 🙏🤩

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    1. Thank you so much sir for appreciation 🙏☺️

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  9. I love the side scientific aspect of your poem, related to love and relationships.

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    1. Thank you so much for appreciation 🙏🥰

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  10. JK Dhali's avatar JK Dhali says:

    Something new, chemistry, physics etc… theory applied in expression, https://jagoran.org/2025/01/12/snack-or-whatever/

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    1. 🤓💯🙏 thank you so much Sir for appreciation 🙏🥰

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