What is the greatest gift someone could give you?
After a long wait
when a gust of breeze had hit me,
bringing with it a new wave of joy,
it plays a music of love like
filling the silence of centuries
with sweet melody in an instant.
It had touched all the strings of my heart.
A constant music that seemed
to flow out of its own accord.
As if I had been waiting for
these melody for centuries.
That intricate melody brings such a deep
ocean of emotions that made me feel my existence.
A universal kind of music played in me
which is connecting me to the ultimate reality.
A feeling arose in which the entire world
seemed to belong to me.
From the earth to the sky, the sun,
the moon, mountains, rivers, fields, lakes,
cities, villages, everything seemed lovely.
Rang-Rivaz 
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Keep ✍️. I look forward to reading of you.
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Thank you so much mam for appreciation 🙏🥰😊
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his poem is a tender and luminous response to the question “What is the greatest gift someone could give you?” It captures that gift not as something material, but as a moment of awakening — a breeze that arrives after long waiting and fills silence with meaning. The imagery of music flowing naturally, touching every string of the heart, is especially beautiful, suggesting a love so profound it feels timeless, as though the soul has been waiting for it across centuries.
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Thank you so much Sir for your blessings 🙏🥰😊
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You are welcome, Dear.
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Shashwat, exquisite poetry—love how it captures the greatest gift as a soul-stirring melody that awakens the universe within, turning silence into eternal harmony. Pure magic!
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Thank you so much Sir for your blessings 🙏🥰😊
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A deeply moving reflection. Your words turn love into music and silence into meaning. It reminds us that the greatest gift is the feeling of belonging—to life, to love, and to the universe itself.
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Thank you so much Mam for appreciation 🙏🥰😄
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Beautifully written.. impressive work by you Shashwat 🤍
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Thank you so much mam for appreciation 🙏🥰😀
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Beautiful post!
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Thank you so much Mam for appreciation 🙏🥰😊
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Happy new year! Praying for good health ans blwssings be upon you friend.
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Happy new year Ishvi 🎊🎇 may God bless you with lots of achievement this year 🤓 thank you so much for comment 🙏🥰😊
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