Revolution

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Reform is the quiet hand,
a mason smoothing cracks in stone,
laws reshaped, rights mended,
a whisper that says, we can endure.
Ensure accountability and transparency.

Revive is the breath of dawn,
old roots drinking morning light,
forgotten songs returning to lips,
a pulse renewed in weary hearts.
Secure rule of law, justice for all.

Revolution is the thunder’s roar,
the fire that will not be denied,
chains shattered, banners rising,
a storm that says, enough is enough.
Perseverance of people will shake
the foundation of government.

Three paths, one destiny
to mend, to awaken, or to burn.
you are in power so the choice is yours.
otherwise next action will ours.

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  1. vermavkv's avatar vermavkv says:

    A powerful and thought-provoking poem! Reform, revival, and revolution represent three different paths to change, yet all remind those in power of their responsibility to the people. I especially appreciate the emphasis on accountability, transparency, justice, and the rule of law. True leadership is not merely about holding power; it is about earning the trust of the people through fairness and responsible governance. When peaceful calls for reform go unheard, public frustration can grow. May wisdom prevail, institutions remain accountable, and justice be delivered before people lose faith in the system. Your closing lines deliver a strong message that those in power should never underestimate the collective voice of the people.

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    1. Thank you so much Sir for your blessings 🙏🥰😎

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  2. datta's avatar datta says:

    The ruling power is clever, smarter, and cunning when required.
    Moves must be fixed with calculation of Chase
    The queen must be followed
    To an unpredictable end
    Task is tough
    Must use the brain enough.

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    1. Agree 💯💯 thank you so much for comment 🙏🥰😎

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  3. I Appreciate, the shift from “old roots drinking morning light” to “thunder’s roar” is powerful. It makes the revolution feel like something natural rather than destructive. “Mend, awaken, or burn” is a strong closing frame.Powerful words. You captured hope and urgency in the same breath. I really enjoyed reading this.

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    1. Thank you so much Mam for appreciation 🙏🥰😎

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  4. Appreciated good keep up the good work ♥️💗😊😊🥰 and like my codes blog and comment please

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  5. sumandray's avatar sumandray says:

    Revolution is the thunder’s roar—let sense prevail among the young people to understand the difference between right and wrong, and understand the motifs behind the motivations of the people who are leading the revolution. It’s easy to get blindsided by observing the revolution leaders traveling fro city to city by air, staying in hotels without questioning who is funding all of these and why!

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    1. Because system is not accountable, Election commission not giving any answer to the questions were raised against them. When people are not allowed to vote, their name was cut without any reason, they themself spend expenses and reached at protest site.

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      1. sumandray's avatar sumandray says:

        I am not here to convince you or change your perspective about life. Be safe is all I say.
        For us we have seen the world over the past few decades and we can see life in comparison. Our parents taught us not to destroy public or private properties and so did we.

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      2. Agree with you but no government is elected to destroy fundamental rights of citizens of the country.

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  6. Kees J. Berg's avatar Kees J. Berg says:

    I would rather partake then endure, nice poem though!

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    1. Thank you so much Sir for appreciation 🙏🥰😎

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